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-//Before Future Unified Language was accepted, people wrote on stones. Here is a selection of preserved ones, with underneath their translations. In time we will add the history of each, and where they were found. For now enjoy the musicality and sense of the past, translated into today's speech and style.
+// In the past, people wrote on stones. Till today this is still happening in our beloved Future Unified Language. Here is a selection of preserved older and contemporary fragments. We will provide translations in due time, with a description of the history of each, and where they were found. For now, just enjoy the musicality and sense of the past. Soon to be translated into today's speech and style, so we can all understand. (IIII Mae, 2164)
 //
-===== 0. About the Inscriptions On Old Grave-Stones =====
+===== 0. Timely Poetics of Stone Writing and More =====
 Written On Stone \\
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-===== 1. THREE EPITAPHS =====
+===== 1. THREE PLUS ONE EPITAPHS =====
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 CLAIM THE FUTURE \\
 (YOUNG FARMERS CLAIM FUTURE) \\
+NO NEED TO BE BURRIED IN YOUR NATIVE PLACE \\
+WHEN SURROUNDED BY GREEN MOUNTAINS \\
+(Saigo Takamori, Mao Zedong, Gívan Belá)
 ===== 2. THE ROOM =====
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 the piano, various objects too \\
 exhausted bodies and thoughts \\
-moving further apartas the morning broke \\
+moving further apart as the morning broke \\
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 That trees and plants have become, are blown away \\
 by a sudden storm, an unexpexted blizzard \\
-Very much wished for but feared, not loved.
+Very much wished for but feared, not loved. \\
 For it makes it difficult to breath at times. \\
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 \\
 she felt being rolled out \\
-in anguish and with disorientation \\
+in anguish and without orientation \\
 \\
 no one ever said she could \\
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 Yesterday loved the clouded sunshine, the harsh hail, \\
 And the turbulent wood dust winds over the waters. \\
-Velocities and accelerations making our feathers grey, \\
+Velocities and accelerations make our feathers grey, \\
 You were on my mind while hungry and wanted to be devoured. \\
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 Don't mix beside the love that a~ \\
+===== 10. The act of love is to consume. =====
+Flew in silently, all webbing legs folded \\
+Noticed you writing in transceiver mode \\
+Blocked out all what was beforehand or secondhand \\
+Believed your honest gnawing wish and hope \\
+\\
+There is no resist, no wait, no flee \\
+There is only the signal to consume \\
+\\
+Now you are gone, some emptiness remains \\
+We humans of a split dog-bird double kind \\
+Can only but agree to contradict in unison \\
+And as you perish, I decompose as well and dazzle \\
+\\
+while diving in a rock \\
+===== 11. Before Done And Gone. A Political Essay. =====
+Today the governing is invisible, private and common altogether. \\
+The empty buildings from former times remain a symbol of how it went wrong.\\
+After the era of managing management like elections and reports, debates, and consultations, \\
+The times for inactive operationability have started and were consensually approved of. \\
+\\
+So nobody comes forward, rather all; \\
+Only good faith and intensions, prevail; \\
+No stratifications, just words and ideas;  \\
+to move up and down and are debated silently. \\
+\\
+The private means, the freedom within the common may be lost, \\
+The councils have been abandoned for meeting rooms, discussion platforms and groups, \\
+And decisions that were before never taken can surface again as we go along, \\
+And all and everything can be effected before done and gone! Rejoice! \\
+\\
+===== 12. Their Own Private Parallel Universes. =====
+the end of the world \\
+is just 5 hours away \\
+by train of course and \\
+by car just the same \\
+\\
+don't tell me \\
+you can't make it \\
+\\
+sort of endof
+===== 13. Warm up. =====
+low \\
+middle \\
+high \\
+\\
+counts \\
+rest \\
+twenty times \\
+\\